Unfortunately, we are unable to accept your application at this time for the following reasons:
• Your abilities section is vague and lists only physical traits rather than any skills Marcus may have. • While the personality section does touch on several key facets of a personality, it doesn't delve into any details, leaving us still questioning exactly who Marcus is. Examples from canon are certainly helpful, but they shouldn't be used in lieu of description. • Your writing samples are all over a year old and we'd like to see something a little newer. • Overall, the writing of the application feels rushed and careless both in wording and structure and there are several grammatical and formatting errors both in your application and the samples provided.
If you would like to rework or rewrite your application and resubmit, you may do so in one week. Thank you again for your interest!
declined
Unfortunately, we are unable to accept your application at this time for the following reasons:
• Your abilities section is vague and lists only physical traits rather than any skills Marcus may have.
• While the personality section does touch on several key facets of a personality, it doesn't delve into any details, leaving us still questioning exactly who Marcus is. Examples from canon are certainly helpful, but they shouldn't be used in lieu of description.
• Your writing samples are all over a year old and we'd like to see something a little newer.
• Overall, the writing of the application feels rushed and careless both in wording and structure and there are several grammatical and formatting errors both in your application and the samples provided.
If you would like to rework or rewrite your application and resubmit, you may do so in one week. Thank you again for your interest!